All Comments on 'The Ritual'

by Cosmoss

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimalmost 10 years ago
Cosmoss

Lovely first submission.

Very erotic.

Please don't take too long in submitting the second.

Shysub412Shysub412almost 10 years ago
Loved it

An excellent first story, hope you continue writing as i would enjoy seeing where this story goes.

5 stars to encourage you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Loved the suspense you built up

Very good first chapter and am riveted to find out how she fares the 2nd time around. Keep up the good work!

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