All Comments on 'The Ritual of Binding'

I enjoyed your story very much. You write well, use words like vibrant, and seems to know the difference between your/you're, etc. More please.

With the humility due from an amanuensis to a master, may I suggest that you take it up a notch, if you are so generous as to offer us more. Most entries in this category are insipid and unimaginative. We who read this category, if I may speak for my silent brethren, are looking for pain and suffering in conjunction with the sex. Pain and suffering, not formulaic kinky sex.

I wish to offer a differing viewpoint. I read this category for the B & D and the D & S, but not the S & M.

I like the story but I would have been a better horror ending if carmen had died and Qarin actually drew allll of her energy. But hey its not my story and I really did enjoy reading it!

amazing writing, what happens next??

Very well done. I'm hoping there's a chapter two...

This story is very cute... I enjoyed it, and the concept behind it (energy vampirism via charm spirit?!?!?!) is actually a pretty darn original one! I can't wait to learn what happens next! Poor Carmen, though! :(

your excellent writing has got me dripping. Thanks for sharing

I loved it, please say theres more!

Dude vampire ghosts, s&m, suprise twist ending and I can't wait to see what he does next. It appeals to so many kinds of pple I wouldn't be Suprised if you could expand it into a novel and i'd buy it even if it was overpriced

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