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All Comments on 'The Ritual Pt. 01'

by rattails

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Spill cheque

Another author trusting there words to spill cheque.

WTF are "poker dots" is that like polka dots?

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 8 years ago
WTF?????????

What kind of shit is this? Should be posted under S&M

kittymacabrekittymacabreover 8 years ago
a good start

This definitely needs some proofreading and editing, but I think its a very good start to an intense story. I'd love to read more.

clippymustdieclippymustdieover 8 years ago
good start.

But that is all it was, a start.

Part 2, 3, 4...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great

I like to see how this story will develop. Continue on it, I can’t wait to see the next chapter!

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