by ManUnited1086
I really enjoy the series you're putting out. I just knew that you'd have Victoria singing the song. I have to wonder what she's going to do when she finds out who wrote it.
Kiersay was definitely one of the better and more fun girls introduced in the series. Though I am looking forward to any potential involvement with Alexandra Daddario. I was surprised Victoria actually didn't run into Duncan in this chapter when he was right there. I feel bad for Duncan. He's being distant, but I think he's just working through it and being pretty mature about it. I wonder if this is how the Grammy connection will play in.
While I'm glad to see there's a good mix of adult & younger famous females, as well as a mix of real & fictional people, I find myself almost unable to read them due to the incredibly-large amount of mistakes in spelling, grammar, punctuation... You name it, you screw it up!
Don't listen to tnadnuder; I didn't catch any serious error that detracted from the story