by ManUnited1086
Yet again, you fail to disappoint. Awesome celebs, loving Alex being back.
Great writing. Glad to see TS back in the folds. Can't wait for the next part.
Good to finally see a new chapter and yet again, another great chapter as always. So your recent comment in the last chapter, you said you'd love to hear some celebrity ideas, I don't know if you meant like new celebrities or the current ones, but if you meant new ones I have few names I can list that I'd love to see, if you want to use them in later chapters or the next season, if there will be another in which I hope there will be, so here:
Amanda Seyfried
Amber Heard
Ashley Benson
Elizabeth Olsen
Dove Cameron
Debby Ryan
Nina Dobrev
Kat Dennings
Eva Green
Kate Beckinsale
Emmy Rossum
i love your writing. everything about its simple amazing. the plot, sex scenes, everything. you're my favorite writer. In my opinion you go from 0 to 100 or 100 to 0 in like one chapter. The dude just open his agency like 6 months ago (he spend 2 entire seasons fighting a bad guy and he lost everything in like 5 chapters) and already he has to close it. He builds anything (relationship, job, TV-show, agency) and then it gets destroy immediate. He has an entire agency, employees, friends, contacts, resources, connections, clients with other connections. Let him fight back without losing everything. i just wanted to tell that still a big fan so I'm going to keep reading...
good luck
This just keeps getting better and better.
Would love to see Emma Watson move to IN Talent too, if that's at all possible. Think there's a submissive side to her she manages to hide pretty well...
I really enjoy the thriller story aspects. It gives this whole series a lot more flavor and texture. And damn, Duncan's in quite a rough situation now. But, if he gets out of it, hopefully he will get some nice TLC from the girls he cares about and they can help nurse him back to health. I did enjoy his clients going to bat for him here.
Though I do wonder if Cole is as nice and genuine as he seems or if he has ulterior motives. All I'm saying is it's a little convenient that they meet for a meal and right after Duncan gets kidnapped. Just saying, it's almost like Cole lured him into it, and he's just getting kidnapped for show. I could be reading too much into it, but I'm sure whatever way it does go will be good.
Excellent stuff!
Victoria Justice and Alexandra Daddario are both beautiful and sexy; choosing between them would drive any man crazy. But, who says you can't have both?
Duncan/Victoria/Alex threesome, possible three-way relationship
I really enjoy your work man, you write some great stuff. It would be cool if Taylor appeared more like Victoria did at the start, she's so underrated in my opinion and doesn't get enough attention.
At least I got to Page 2 before I couldn't count ALL the mistakes!
Emily, Gigi, & Alexandra Daddario sound/read good.