by ManUnited1086
As always, great chapter! I especially enjoyed how deep the chapter was, capturing Duncan's emptiness, and his continued search for the one he truly loves who can fill that emptiness; Victoria or Alexandra, or both. Can't wait, literally, to read where things go from here. Hopefully I don't have to wait too long.
Keep up the good work.
Great job man, loved it. I gotta say this was a really interesting chapter. But I'm really interested to see as what is to come of the little situation Duncan was proposed to. Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope it doesn't take to long. Oh also the last comment you made in the previous chapter you said had published it and that was like almost a week ago when it had just showed up yesterday. Does it always take long? Literotica needs to fix that or something. Unless it's supposed to take that long.
I really hope that he doesn't get back with either of them and just move on
I honestly don't know what Page I stopped on because I couldn't understand what was happening due to all the mistakes!!!