All Comments on 'The Rolls and the Pipe Ch. 01'

a good start but perhaps you have your hero for i imagine Kaiser will be the hero a little too good to be true

Thanks - I've written chapter 2 and 3 already (I'm surprised that 3 pages on Word97 is only one on .lit), and 2 has just been posted.

Kaiser's an interesting character in that he's MUCH more involved than he seems in this chapter. I won't say too much more here, but you'll find out a little more about what he's like in following sequences.

I'll see if I can draw out Ch. 4 to be 9 pages on Word97, but I'm not sure if I can do that without confusing the story line.

Comments appreciated!