All Comments on 'The Rolls and the Pipe Ch. 02'

by D. Mattanthas

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Interesting...

This is taking a while, innit? Don't mind, but I'm not getting th relationship between Kaider and Pgae. Yah.

jimhawkinsjimhawkinsover 19 years ago
yes it is interesting

and yes I'm not getting the sense of feel of the relationship for Kaiser says he was going on a date, not an interview, but Paige in her story (Ch 1) talks only of an interview. So where does Kaiser get the idea of the date? Did he know Paige before? if so how? if not why a date?. Perhaps our author may answer these in chapter 3. So far an intriguing story but much more can be done.

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