All Comments on 'The Roommate'

by ValoryG

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LuvbttmsnsissiesLuvbttmsnsissiesalmost 8 years ago
Nice beginning

Nice beginning...am curious as to where you will take it - and how you will take it there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

i do believe it does not end here

pampywampypampywampyalmost 8 years ago

i do hope there is more ,xx cant wait

married_but_curiousmarried_but_curiousalmost 8 years ago
You left it hanging ...

I would have suggested holding off on publishing until a lot more had transpired to move the plot forward, such as them having sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Nice story

I hope you write more chapters to this story. I can picture how it might progress and look forward to see if I am write. I love that you are staring slow and make me want more.

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernalmost 8 years ago
Definitely left me lusting for more, you tease!

Ok, you've got me building so much wetness with real interesting characters with intriguing back grounds and visual imagery and then, THATS IT!?!!! N

There had Better be a part 2 and soon!

LeeannecdLeeannecdalmost 8 years ago
Great story.

Great story. More please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great story

Roomy's panties in hand, Anticipating chapter 2

Boris6942Boris69427 months ago

Pity. It seems there will not be a Part 2. Was a nice story.

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