All Comments on 'The Roommate Assignment Ch. 02'

Cute story. Loved it

Sadness

How?! That was so rushed and just got good...

I saw this to lots of writer's, because it is universally true: So much depends on grammar, spelling and style that attempting to write without it is paramount. You have that licked, with gets you 3.5 of Lit's scale. A good idea (I love the roommate concept) is 0.5. From then on, how it happens and how much sex versus story line is critical. You have it dicked, pardoning the pun. Short stories may get good ratings, but seldom see a lot of readers. If you build a good scenario, good characters, etc, as you did here, then adding longer and more chapters is ideal. Great Start.

I think that chapter 1 was better than this.I hate that you ended it here,could have had more with more and better sex!

Excellent story... keep them coming.

I liked Chap 1, but things sort of got too involved in chap 2.