All Comments on 'The Roommate Assignment'

by burgh173

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

The end was extremely abrupt, it made the story incomplete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

The little bitch showed his true colors. Billy deserves better and should cut him off

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

It's dibs not dips

AriEroticaAriEroticaover 8 years ago

Edit please how would jakes balls be hitting Billy's taint if billy is on his back while getting fucked. His taint is between his balls and asshole. Unless jake is a freak of nature and his balls are above his cock this makes no fucking sense

AriEroticaAriEroticaover 8 years ago

Reverse jake and billy and jake in my comment. But yeah fix it in story please

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
3rd me preferred

Very nicely written, but it should be continued by a threesome with double penetration.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
What a self righteous ass

His words tell you exactly what he thinks of Billy. I feel bad for Billy. To have chosen to go back repeatedly, there's a certain amount of trust involved. Troy just shattered that. I think he'd be persona non grata in my books from then on. I mean, what's next, telling his friends that the boys are free game for that treatment? So no cool.

burgh173burgh173over 8 years agoAuthor
Part 2

I do have a second part for this story. Almost done!

Sorry for the confusion. I should have put an "To be continued..."

SuthrnlvrSuthrnlvrover 8 years ago
Spread the word

You need to have Billy spread the word all around Campus that Troy likes to fuck men!! Will serve him right the asshole.

63lsmith63lsmithover 8 years ago
LIKED

I like the way this is going, sounds like real life to me

Sexy_yayaSexy_yayaabout 8 years ago
Part 2

Love this story. As someone else commented it feels like real life which makes it so great. if you could make a longer story out of this that would be amazing.

derek6193derek6193about 6 years ago
great till the end

it was great, until the end. I didn't like the way it ended. it was as much of a let down for the reader as it must have been for Billy.

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