by AspernEssling
Loved the finish... It was bound to happen, but still somewhat unexpected. Well done.
I honestly thought that Ronnie would be with Tanya. That whole future building line, but she does not make money for him to mooch off.
The Tanya thing will not last. Joe is a nice guy. He needs a real person. Janet the third sister? Ha!
The room mate reaction to him being. Sex god. That will be interesting.
Cannot wait to see what happens next and what is said???
It has all been said, so I will, rate it, and as a reader ask for more.
NorthPacific
OK, why all the minuses?
That's not good penmanship, and you KNOW what I mean. Poor writing doesn't score well.
"She was, as the Germans might say, all Titzenbum."
Well, I'm German, but I never read or heard the word. It doesn't resemble any german word. Even googled it out of sheer wonderment - but nothing even close came up, german or otherwise. Funny little word, wonder where you found it.
First part may be a mixture of "Titten" (boobs) and "Zitzen" (teats, nipples of cows or goats), but "Bum" leaves me totally perplexed.
That said, thank you for your great stories. I've read most of them and liked them all very much. You're a wonderful writer, really.
I think the last anon commenter needs a sense of humour transplant. I know he's German, but despite that even he should be able work out that titzenbum = tits 'n bum