All Comments on 'The Roommate Pt. 01'

Good start

Well written story. Gave me a big hard on while reading it. Can't wait to read more.

Now the only thing you can do is just enjoy the transformation. Trust me, turning into a girl will be the best sensation in your whole life.

Not too much of a stretch, where will you go?

:)

I wish so much there was a magic powder that I could take to grow boobies in one day and longer hair and make my little dickyclit even smaller. I do want to be the bimbo.

I love this but you need an editor to clean up some of the rough sentence structure at times. Some of the prose doesnt flow well - but all of that can be improved with some editing and other eyes on the text.

Great story and great development. Go slower in the transformation even if its "magic gender swapping powder".