All Comments on 'The Roommate Pt. 04 - Miranda'

This is a wonderfully thought out and written work. I have to admit that I'm very much like Lori. Thank You very much for sharing this. I will be waiting with great anticipation for the next chapter.

Sorry, but Miranda just took a turn for the worse in my opinion. Become a controlling almost abusive person.

Yes, another whole side of Miranda was revealed. But I hope to keep her human and not a stereotype.

I will hang around and read the next chapter because the writing is really good.

But I am not so sure of the domination bit. This started as a nice romance/friendship, and then went suddenly south... In a bad way. I hope they can work things out.

This is a well-written and well-paced story. It sounds like some of the comments are approaching this story as if it were real life -- as in non-fiction. But it IS fiction; it IS a story. And if it doesn't float your boat, there are plenty of others in Literotica that might serve your purpose(s).

Hmm ...interesting twists...not where I thought this was going... also am not a dom/sub fan...But...I gotta know how the next chapter or two go... so guess I'm cautiously...... hooked!

Liked it up to this point. I would say adios Chica. I am Kira out of chastity. For those into that aspect of D/S, cool, just a hard limit for me lol. Very well written though. All in all it's very good. I may even read the rest. Keep up the good work