All Comments on 'The Rose Palace Ch. 02'

I enjoyed the two stories about the sex club very much and gave them both a 5.0. That being said, you need an editor. You put together a great story but the English grammar and typos are distracting. Probably many readers pay no attention to that type of thing but to someone who reads a lot and has had some composition training the errors stand out and interrupt the story line momentarily.

I absolutely loved your story, both this part and the previous! It was interesting to read and made me smile. Also, as it ended on a comment about the contract, it said that the employee couldn't go to the employers home and ask for sex, and she and her father live in the same house... Food for thought and maybe potential teasing material for father during the next chapter? Again, I love your story and I hope to read a next installment

I love love luv the fact that she had the opportunity to be with her dad 1st. The only bond as strong, stronger even, as a father and daughter is the one between a mother and her children. I can't wait to see what mom does. And I know there is some much tougher sex comin with dad!

My only criticism is:

1. Please make the chapters longer (and)

2. Please hurry up and write ch. 3, lol

So glad this story died it was absolute shit.

Honestly, even in your Universe this just would happen the authorities would see to that

So, given the ridiculous nature of this sad and sorry tale, l rate it 1/5.

Hoping that there will be a chapter 3, this series is off to a great start! Looking forward to reading more about this very incestious family and business. More please...