All Comments on 'The Royal Line Pt. 03'

Enjoying This Little Read. You certainly have a way with your words, small errors, but I was able to get through them. The suspense as to what is going on, is murder. I would like to know, who is next to be king or queen... I also love your name choices, although i dont understand Satin nor Hale. Satin....the meat was as smooth as satin....or satin strips of meat... Ok... i worked that on out, but what about Hale?? Lol. Anywho.....Great Story....Im officially hooked and you're added to my favs. Kisses

Loved every moment! You write with such detail and I especially love the dialog. More milk next time please