All Comments on 'The Run'

by 84CalCan

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AngelliccDesireeeAngelliccDesireeeover 16 years ago
It was nice BUT

I'm not sure it was in the rest category. I thought it was a bit short and the need more detail. Keep up the good work

BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERover 16 years ago
Different

I think you could have put this in several categories, including the one that it is in.

I would have like to read more, especially at the beginning.

Still, it was pretty good.

malishalmalishalover 14 years ago
good job

nice short story. great mood and atmosphere setting.

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