All Comments on 'The Runaway Aristocrat'

This is my first try to write an erotic story.

I hope you can give me some pointers to improve my writing.

Keep going with as many angles and choices as possible

It is an interesting story, but interactive? Not so much... There should be other options for each event. Like "Do you decide to run away?" And the options be yes or no, or something else like that.

i really enjoyed this, but its not interactive. in order to be so there must be different options to choose from. as it is now, those numbered titles are just annoying.

but do keep it up, sounds like it has a lot of potential