All Comments on 'The Rustic Cabin Ch. 02'

WOW, I loved the original and never thought there could be a good sequel but this author is something else and proved me wrong. I'm a female and I was dripping during this entire read.

Good story, good sequel, but it plays merry hell with the narrative and especially the imagination flow when the author loses track of who the characters are. We start with Amy, move onto Jan and then back to Amy. Hmmm Just basic bad proof reading and checking! Always read at least twice before you post the story up. But thanks anyway. M.

I love the way you write and paint a verbal picture. The story was ber hot and the characters believable. I was confused, though, as to why the name of the daughter kept going from Amy to Jan and back again.