All Comments on 'The Sales Assistant'

Very nicely written with a wonderfully different set up than most stories! I hope the customer returns soon and allows her inner vixen to emerge by trying on a pair of stiletto-heeled pumps suggested by her shop girl!

A woman comes into this shop and they walk out a very happy woman and with a very sexy shoes.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

Im looking forward to the second visit. A lady does need shoe's and a lovely sales assistant. Loved the part about the foot massage. satyr040

You do it again MS Black! Your ability to write erotica is unsurpassed. You know exactly how to build tension, and more importantly, when to release. I love all of your work.

Terry Australia

Thanks... liked the story, good angles... different enough to be erotic for the thinking.

loved the biography... resignedly diffident english humour... recognisable in a n instant only to another from that strange land... thanks for making me smile as well

Thanks... liked the story, good angles... different enough to be erotic for the thinking.

loved the biography... resignedly diffident english humour... recognisable in a n instant only to another from that strange land... thanks for making me smile as well

Finding your lovely story, and then reading the comments from a few years ago, was like finding a book in the library and seeing that it hadn't been stamped with a due date in a long time. Thanks for the sexy read among the stacks!

almost felt that i was in the store room watching you both. great story

You need to put a warning up if it's going to be a dub-con.

I loved this;the story pulled me in, gently at first, and then with an intensity that provided a wonderful rush....wonderful!

gail

Very very good