All Comments on 'The Sales Call'

by TheBobster

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
The swaping

With you going back and forth between you telling the story and her telling the story, it is hard to follow the plot.Think it over and try again. Good luck

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
very hot descriptions

nice, hot! At times a little hard to follow, but enjoyable all the same..... Thx

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