All Comments on 'The Sales Star Ch. 02'

Indian slut. Is it okay for hubby to be getting some on the side? Do you know who Udays been boffing on the side. Watch out!!!!!

A bitch dog that mate with any other dogs will never be satisfied with 1 mate.The bitch should never be married.

The story remains on a strong track regardless of idiot anonymous commentaries who are trying to impose their religious mores on a porn fantasy website. I liked the use of narrator having a female ally as a Greek chorus to unwinding erotic tragedy ( let's face it , this cannot end happily ) .

Many posters accuse the British Authors to be WIMP supporters, but I read many revenge stories here in LW section from British Author. However Nobody detected THERE IS NOT ANY REVENGE OR CONSEQUENCE STORIES in the LW section from INDIAN AUTHOR. What is the couse?

This warmed up slowly, but inexorably. Very predictable, but it's a nice easy climb.

I feel something sinister is being planned behind those closed doors by Uday and Sharmaji. I'll find out soon enough! :)

i am reading this story putting my gf in my mind. it is such a gr8 experience

This one got hot in a hurry. I'm used to your more deliberate pace, but the accelerated seduction is a more than welcome diversion. Did I say "seduction?" Ketaki is more than willing, which bodes well for those of us who enjoy your particular flavor of hot, steamy sex. And what to make of the condom? I haven't a clue, but I can't wait to find out. This one has me hooked.

I have enjoyed the build up.However,her mind straying during the sex scene slows the momentum and takes the punch out of the action.Looking forward to the next chapter.

It was a wonderful wonderful dick rising build up. The hurried first mating could be termed as practical. In reality you start and if the intro is a slight favourable, you start talking and fucking straight away. So this was very real life like situation. You are a wonderful author bay. I love you.