All Comments on 'The Sales Star Ch. 05'

I find myself liking Sharma more and more but still think Uday is likely to turn out to be a conniving asshole. The contract, however, should be a lock (not that I think she will get much benefit from her efforts, except for her first pregnancy!)

It must love. Excellent comical minutiae side courses proffered up by the author along with main entree of primal lust recounted at feral intensity.

Its difficult to maintain a fine balance between a total lust ridden story and a story that keeps you aroused! Interesting though the result was predictable!

great story.......lov it

Quite possibly the finest desi story I have read in a few years! Classic!

The references to Mumbai and lots of company or corporate stuff made it so detailed, engrossing and erotic I had to fap four times till I reached the last part. First-person female narration always floats my boat. Cheers!

without a double penetration. Can't say that she didn't have it coming. I love it!

The switch from Uday to Swarma was unexpected and the story got more speed and tension from it. With Uday adamant to use condoms, and Swarmi wriggling in without. If Urbanslut got pregnant from Swarmi and kept it, that would have been a real hot surprise! However, at some point, the author lost the courage to pursue this thread, and the story got totally botched up in part 6.