by Tween2Legs
I love the beginning. It was a kind of fun and something new. But then on the peak the story went too fast. You could have embellished the story a bit more. But I loved the Basic idea of it.
That shit was hilarious! I'm going to give you five stars just for making me laugh my ass off. That's not an easy thing to do, but you accomplished you. You EARNED these stars. (High five)