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All Comments on 'The Satin Dress'

by IntoTheMirror

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
scrap the

Scrap the frequent and over use of "..." doesn't do anything but distract from the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yes, some minor errors, but--

it was a good story. I liked it.

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