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by watersprite529

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good idea but . . .

I liked the premise and wanted to like the story but even erotica needs well written characterisation, dialogue, description and plot to make it work and I found these elements unconvincing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

What no chance for a bath in the nice waterfall? *pouts*

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