by Funaboard
I knew you weren't an writer... and I wasn't disappointed. You are not.
How about starting with "My wife and I" and not "Me and my wife"...
Then get an interesting topic with some redeemable quality and develop some character as well as a story board and fill that in before you put ink on paper.
Get down there and eat that great tasting warm creampie. YUM YUM YUM
First of all....Just because you don’t believe the story, doesn’t mean it isn’t, or can’t be, true. My wife and have been married since ’72, got married at 19 and 17. After the first two years we started spicing up our love life. I would write about our little adventures, but you probably wouldn’t appreciate them. After all…nobody does that kind of thing, or allows his wife to have her fun. Let me tell you something, next time you decide to pop off with some BS like that, take a trip to the local nude beach, nudist resort, or swing club. It really does happen more than the “can’t ever happen” crowd would want to believe.
If you don't know the basic rules of english you shouldn't be writing.
Couldn't be bothered to read it after that. 1*
Reading some of the comments below are probably the same people that criticize every story. These guys are all fat 40-year-old losers living in their mother's basement and can't write a story of their own because they have no girlfriend or wife only a blowup doll and Internet porn So being the author of the story you should just delete these losers and keep only the positive comments.
My wife Debbie and I had the same experience in the Elks Lodge sauna in Redwood City California that had only a man's sauna. I snuck her in on a Sunday morning and were enjoying the sauna when a guy came in and similar thing happened but I was the one Fucking her while she's giving the other guy a fantastic below job.
So keep writing
so if you wife is a total slut and you want me to read one of her adventures?
- straight off I am bored because your wife is a slut who does this shit all the time? Do you get it? wouldn't it be a little bit more exciting if she wasn't a slut, get it?????
You must have lots of life insurance on her. Start using condoms and keep your fingers crossed. Or just abstain until the incubation period is passed. You can always hook up with Annette in the mean time, if you are really smooth and persuasive: "Wanna fuck?"
You lost me with glaring grammatical errors in the first two sentences. Figured there was no point in continuing to read.
Hey, ignore the negative comments Funaboard. Ok, so the writing style isn't perfect, but there's more to a good story than perfact grammar and spelling. Real life stories are hot. Even if they are dangerous. Fucking a stranger with no protection is dangerous. And pregnancy is NOT the biggest danger. But morals aside, I enjoyed your story.
Anytime comment starts out with "ignore", I consider that comment a waste of time. Authors aren't dumb, they're well aware the type of reactions they will get in loving wives. Only a fool wouldn't know, if you write trash, expect a trashy come back. Simple reasoning.
Also Mark, not everyone has your take on what makes a good story. What may be "good" to you, may be "trash" to some one else.
Since when is "grammar" not important. Poorly written stories laden with grammar mistakes are difficult to read, at least to the educated. I guess the question then becomes, are you educated?
No comment on story, didn't bother to read it, comments told me I wouldn't like it.
A man does not want someone else fucking his wife. either he doesn't really care much for her or he's a faggot. Men are territorial and that's what planting your cock in a woman does, stake her out as your property. Only a cuckold faggot believes otherwise.
I'm single good looking, 50 from Houston. 5,7 32 waist and 42 chest. I have been reading so many stories, but have not done yet with cuckolding. But really turns me on. I travel, I would love to see pictures. I am 8"cut clean no stds. My email is danieleric1818@gmail. Hot, Hot
the people who claim only faggots and cucks would put up with this or that you should kill a guy as soon as he looks at your wife, car, dog lol are emotionally stunted.... i have thrown guys out of rooms and even set the dog on one lol
however i have also let my hard on control my head ....... it happens ! and it can be very very hot ! enjoyed the story and have been the cucked husband in the story.
My wife took a sauna on holiday as I was sun bathing. After a while I went to the sauna and looked through the doir window. A guy was between her legs eating her shaved pussy. She had her hands behind his head holding him there and was moving about enjoying what he was doing. He moved up and tried to mount her but she tried to push him off,he was too strong and he mounted her. He started fucking her and she grabbed his bum to get all of him into her, I opened the door but they didn't know and she was telling him to fuck harder. She told him he was the best fuck she ever had he looked round and told me she was gagging for it. Then she saw me and smiled and said, "I think my husband is enjoying watching you fuck me." The guy carried on fucking her until she came and he came inside her. We all got showered and went forva drink. A496
well it does to me! enjoyed the story and it rings true, anyone who says it doesnt has lived in a cave and wasted their life! have had many a sexual escapade in a sauna!
FIVE stars.
Since he fucked her bareback maybe she will end up with an STD. The husband obviously will have it too as they went home to fuck. If there are couples that do this, they deserve what happens.