All Comments on 'The Scarlet Dove - Issue 11'

Thanks for another great chapter! I love that Starling is starting to realize her kinks, though I was hoping things would get a bit kinkier.

Baker: "I think you like not having a choice...you're one of them stuck up, pent up chicks that thinks if you have sex, it makes you a slut or something...so when me, or someone else takes away that choice, it makes us the bastard instead of making you a slut."

Wow, Lady Jane, you took me by surprise with this Issue. Never thought a blackmailing scumbag would have any kind of insight into Starling's kinks. I love Crimson Dove so much, in the best possible way! It feels just like she is a real person, and I revel in how easy you make it to care about her so deeply. It causes such exquisitely mixed feelings to empathize with her so thoroughly and yet see her go through such challenging experiences as a super-heroine.

You are making it so much fun to think about my own kinks and what it is about super-heroine peril that appeals to me so much. I'm so glad and thankful I met you here, and am thrilled to be influenced by your writing style. I know you make me a better writer simply by sharing your creativity and letting all of us here enjoy your sweet, sexy, sensuous imagination.

What an awesome part of yourself to give so freely! I think any person who gets to share this part of your personality with you in private would be the luckiest person in the world! I hope I didn't go too far in saying that; I was only meaning it as a sincere compliment. *smiles*

I hope you have seen and enjoyed the Wonder Woman movie as much as I have. I have seen it six times already, if that gives you any indication of how thrilled I am with it. And it touches me so deeply that I think I've gotten tears in my eyes each time.

Anyway, I will shoot this to you in an e-mail to make sure you see it as soon as possible. Take care, and please keep being YOU! -- Val McJames

I've been reading stories over at DeviantArt with Crimson in the title and that bled over here to say Crimson instead of Scarlet. I am so embarrassed! I sincerely apologize for using Crimson in my comment!

Cannot wait for the next one. I love how you balance her life, and this chapter had some extraordinary scenes

That was great! God, this story is so erotic is makes the blood boil. Reading a new Scarlet Dove story is one of the highlights of my month!

I loved how dismissive Baker was of her and how much she was in denial of what she really wants. I really want to see Scarlet at her lowest after all of this and forced to reveal the weakness of her feminine side. But I'm sure you have LOTS of plans regarding her and I'm sure I'll love each and every one of them.

Loved her trying her best at the wet t-shirt contest. Who knows? Maybe this will lead to a more outgoing and sexy personality for her Starling persona.