All Comments on 'The Scene Ch. 01: The Script'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Men needed sex

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 8 years ago
It was

there for the taking and she was willing, mom downstairs wasn't helping matters much.

Chapter two: Just make sure you know where the Hymen is before you write it, so many fuck this up when writing about it.

DoktahZDoktahZover 8 years ago
Awesome beginning

Great start! I'm hoping you'll stick to the innocence and we'll get a good unprotected creampie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
great start

just don't leave the story there you have such a good beginning keep on trucking tenbears43 will be looking for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great start

Great start to the story: keep looking for the follow up - please don't keep us waiting too long :-)

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