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JonATaylorJonATaylorover 11 years ago
Vivid Narration

You have a way with vivid narration. I'd like to see you slow it down, develop characters and intersperse dialogue. Just a thought.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Again, a new perspective

I love how you take situations that are never written about and bring them to life. Well done.....

FreedomBaseFreedomBaseover 11 years ago
Very Good

I'll have to come here more often. You have a way with words that explains the way with no words. You have talent.

CoventinaNyxCoventinaNyxover 11 years ago
Amazing!

This was a wonderful erotic loving journey. Thank you for letting us take the trip with her!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow....

Great, written well. Hot and heart warming.

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