by alitanyofdesires
Disjointed and poorly written. And I fail to see why it is called The Scholarship.
Good start but I hope she isn't going to be enjoying the punishments for the next 2 years, really need to feel the girls humiliation and pain. You need us to feel the pain the girls are feeling when being spanked and punished. Hope you carry on and don't worry about negative comments, they normally come from people who don't actually write any stories of there own.
Great start. Can't wait to read as she gets more punishments. Five stars.