All Comments on 'The Scholarship Pt. 01'

by alitanyofdesires

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You've got my attention

This is very good. Looking forward to more.

FASfanFASfanover 7 years ago
Promising ...

... I look forward to reading more. Thank you -- five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Disjointed and poorly written.

Disjointed and poorly written. And I fail to see why it is called The Scholarship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

some of he best writing i've seen in a while. looking forward to more!

silent_submissive114silent_submissive114over 7 years ago

A great start look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Looking forward

To reading more chapters of this story.

artty67artty67over 7 years ago
Good start

Good start but I hope she isn't going to be enjoying the punishments for the next 2 years, really need to feel the girls humiliation and pain. You need us to feel the pain the girls are feeling when being spanked and punished. Hope you carry on and don't worry about negative comments, they normally come from people who don't actually write any stories of there own.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More Please

Great start. Can't wait to read as she gets more punishments. Five stars.

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