All Comments on 'The School Reunion'

write a story about her watching oyher women....fucking brilliant story, made me come like a train

Jesus, that was nasty! I absolutely love the idea of a proper British wife being a secret road-slut and an abject size-queen.

Lorri, darling, this is one of the best pieces I've read on Lit. You make it absolutely real, make me feel like you're talking to me. Great first story! Write more, and fast.

Perdita xoxoxo

very hot! loved the dialog! haven't been here long, but this story's my favorite by far.

Delicious story, Lorri! Wish I was 30 years younger, and I could have been one of the four lads he's going to fetch from the party!

Excellent story. Sure brought me to attention in all the right places.

loved the anal bit made me want to do it straight away keep em cumming lori

Hi Lorri,

Just read your story, fuck that was hot (just like you)

Boy, is this a REAL slut! Sure hope she lands on her ass out the door with the divorce to follow!

Loved this yarn - Very well told-

The bitch sure must have had a sore ass.

How did she feel after a few more had fucked it?

There's no chance that her husband will find out. This is fantasyland, where the husbands are all clueless and every other man is a better lover than him.

100% for the hot sex scenes minus 75% for the cheating leaves 25% for the score.

This is my public comment about the story. Not about other posters.

Imagine the kind of wife a slut like that would make. Love her lots! Incredible story, so vivid I could see myself going into the soccer store room and seeing her legs spread wide open all wet and ready. Nice job! Very nice job!

you lucky lady

Hell of a job. I don't much care for anal myself, but it lent so much to the slutty wife persona that it didn't matter. Full marks!

Best story I've ever read on Lit.

Love the natural way it is told and written.

Hope there is a great deal more to 'come.' if you will pardon the pun.

If it had of been a one time thing, it could have been erotic. But since she does it all the time, who cares.

Hot story, I didn't like the name calling; for some reason I see her as just a horny female, not a "whore": don't ask me why.

But like I said, a hot story, did what I read stories for.

Rudy

That's the sound water makes when it finds something truly HOT *grin*

Loved the way you told the story LL, I've often wanted to do the same and when trying found it lacking, but yours was excellent!

Makes me look forward to the next chapter *devil* and hold my breath hoping when the door opens half a dozen of Trevors friends step in.

You're an excellent writer of the erotic hun!!! Keep it cumming!

Your story is just as hot as you are. Keep the stories (and me) cumming.

HI LORILOVE,

YOUR STORY GAVE ME A HOT HARD FUCKING PRICK THAT I HAD TO STROKE THROUGH THE WHOLE STORY. WELL I DIDN`T HAVE TO I WANTED TO. ALMOST MADE ME CUM ALL OVER MY KEYBOARD. YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER AND PLEASE KEEP MORE STORIES CUMMING,

auralsex

Hot depraved dirty slut fucking whore story.

must be to do this type of shit.

Been swinging for a few years but wished we could meet up with a Lori and her partner(s) love to read the next installment but prefer they leave the condoms off.

Great story

Mark Twain saidsimething about the American and English, being two people separated by a common language. I'm from Minnesota, right smack in the middle of what both US coasts call flyover land, and much of the British English needed a translation for me.

Wow! A wife turns whore at the class reunion story. Haven't seen that before.

Pure SHIT!