All Comments on 'The Schoolgirl Ch. 01'

A teacher and an 18 year old student is not romantic.

Sounds hot, keep going

Definitely a reach for this category, but it looks to me like you're turning what could easily be a crude fantasy into something with more of a slow lustful build that will end up romantic and erotic. I give it 5* based on your writing quality, and I'm eager to read the next installment.

More chapters!

This is different than your other stuff but definitely intriguing. Looking forward to seeing where you take it!!!

at least she has to be half way smart to be in a.p. classes and not just a dumb cum dumpster.

Naughty but nice. Now, where is my old school uniform. Lol.

Xxxxx

Emily

Loved this. Please write more chapters ASAP :)

But perhaps that was intentional? She sounds a bit like an airhead, a somewhat different kind of clueless from your other story's main character Lena. Too early to tell where it's going, but as usual, I like the writing.

@Anon ‘not romantic’

Sorry about that! I’m sure you’ll find plenty of stories in this category that are the romance you’re looking for =).

@Anon “ignore”

Thanks for the support! I intend to submit a few more chapters!

@Anon “intrigued”

Definitely starting to realize this may have been the wrong category haha. Oh well, we’ll see how it goes. Thanks for the vote!

@kevinhill24

I’m working on a few more! Thanks for reading =).

@fefe428

Hello!!! So I wanted to try something a little lighthearted and different. Lena-Renz can be a little draining (in the best way) because of historical details/length/darker overall tone. Thanks for giving this story a chance, I really appreciate it =).

@redlion75

Hmm…not sure if this is positive or negative. Either way, thanks for reading and thanks for the feedback! =)

@EmilyWest

I miraculously managed to squeeze into mine…that’s what inspired this story ;)

@Anon “more”

Working on a few more! =)

@Anon “annoying”

Fully intentional haha. I wanted to play around with lighter, less serious characters =). Sorry if I overdid it, and thanks for giving this story a chance! =)

With love,

-B xo

IM SO CURIOUS ON WHERE THIS STORY IS HEADING! Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter !!!

You're one of my favorite authors. And really do believe this will turn out as one of the best chapters in here!

Love the build up!!! Update soon! :)

So this is what your naughty mind came up with after our "interviews"...I expect you to be in this uniform when I return home ;).

-Your biggest (and hardest) fan

I'm very interested in where this story will lead. It's great so far.

Well told very hot.