All Comments on 'The Schoolgirl's Dirty First Time'

Hey, Catherine, I liked it very much. Keep up the good writing.

that was hot keep writing i am looking foward to more

I total like felt every thing as I came best story ever

Catherine do go on, I loved evrything in this story!

Nice ugly-duckling-to-sexy-swan story. I look forward to you "submitting" even more...

Please don't limit yourself to this one story Catherine..

This is a very sexy and hot beginning!

Beautiful writing and SO hot! Thanks.

Erotic, indeed.

Oh god this made me sooo wet.... ANOTHER ONNEEE

WOW what a hot story, I hope we see a lot more from you

That's amazing, I love it. Great detail and description.

Great story! But you really teased me with the "willing asshole" line. I was really hoping for some anal action

what a very erotic very hot horny story .

love reading this first one of your brilliant story

The schoolgirl,s dirty first time, would love to read even more awesome writing so come on let your pen start to write .

Beautifully descriptive. I like the story behind your first sexual encounter. I think any older guy who loves women and sex would have felt privileged to be your first lay.

More, please!

Seemed more brutal than enjoyable.