All Comments on 'The Seahorse Society Ch. 02'

Reading the story I found a few typos that escaped my editing. Sorry about that. I write a wide variety of things including those submitted to this adult site. Due to the prolific nature of my written work I wind up jumping back and fourth between a variety of stories, and a other publications. This means unfortunately sometimes a proof read doesn't catch the errors and in spite of doing this a few times, the odd typo will slip past. But over all I hope that the story shared with you the reader is a good quality work that flows well and captures your imagination. Thanks for having a look. Cheers!

I don't recall seeing any typos, but there were several problems like using "weather" instead of "whether" (and vice-versa), spelling "semen" as "seamen" (shades of South Park!)", spelling "ma'am" as "mam", and several others. These distracted from what was, otherwise, an enjoyable read.

There were definitely some typos on top of the spelling errors you pointed out. Unfortunately I was in a bigger hurry than I should have been during the proofing. Whether Vs. Weather and Seamen vs. semen are examples of mistakes I should have easily noticed and corrected. Thanks again. I will be sure to take time to slow down in the future when proof reading. I'm very grateful to you for pointing out those rather glaring and obvious flaws. I always hate that when reading other people's stories, but I am far more self critical than I am of other authors. Much appreciated. I'll be far more vigilant in the future before anything goes through. Glad you liked the general content and story line. Cheers!

A sweet simple sexy romance....more please!

I've got more coming. I'm working on several stories at the same time. But I'll have more for everyone as soon as I can get it there. I am envisioning either 3 or 4 parts to the tale. Thanks for your feedback. I'm glad that you've been enjoying this one. Cheers!

watching the progression of a caterpillar into a butterfly. Trying to figure out how the simultaneous metamorphosis of the residents of her aquarium indicates what is happening or is about to happen. Is Tawd a seahorse ALA mermaids?