All Comments on 'The Sebastian Files Ch. 03'

I wonder how incest will be presented.

Looking forward to more chapters and what Amanda has to add,

I'm interested in what issues Dr. Sebastian helped Amanda resolve that she had been unaware previously she even had. It will be interesting how that is articulated.

Really good. It deserves a higher score than it has. It sucks that people give it a low score because it has no sex in it. Brother sister incest stories is all about the romance and slow build up. The build up is just beginning in this one, but soon enough the tension will be unbearable. When the sex happens at that tension level, there is nothing better. On to the actual review. No grammer nor any spelling issues, one point. Concept is strong as it is unique, two points. The character interactions are very believable within the situation you, the author, put them in, two points. Five points total. Good job, you get a full score.