All Comments on 'The Second Oldest Profession'

And slightly scary. Man, I can relate to how Dane feels! This is overwritten at times, and I know that's your style, but it would do the story good to pull back. That said, the characters are fresh and compelling, the dialogue is GREAT and the topic is enlightening and intoxicating. Even though I wailed with frustration at the ending (at first) you made the right choice to stop where you did. The imagination is a powerful thing. Why, I can almost hear Dane's screams and sobs and laughter ...

liked where u ended it, life's ordinariness is its comfort and through it ordinariness we're looking for moments of time that will take us past it. that said, I skimmed paragraphs as the writing was over blown in parts.