by GeneraZ
What a great story! I loved the flow and easy to understand pacing. I've come to really like the characters. I hope there will be more!
I loved how you built this up and every detail you put into the way they first kissed. Marla was every bit the mature and experienced character, Jessica the innocent prey but by no means a victim. You have talent, I hope you find the inspiration that is evident in these works to tell more stories.