All Comments on 'The Secret Lives of Goddesses 01 Pt. 04'

by GeneraZ

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DBRN84DBRN84over 6 years ago
This is great!

I love this series.

natlouwetnatlouwetabout 9 years ago
Love it

I love Jessica and Marla, they are very well written characters!

GeneraZGeneraZover 10 years agoAuthor
Re: a spot of disappointment

Sorry about that, I didn't feel like writing about the pregnant life. :p but for what it's worth, the sequel stars their daughter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A spot of dissapiontment

I loved the whole story up until the end "You are bearing my child." well i hope that is not the end ???? its too blah i'd like to see how jessica becoms accustomed to her pergnancy... and there hot pergnant sex ........

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
More Please!!!!!

I loved this story could we have more at least an epilogue of this story. Please

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great sex scene's

The sex in this is first rate. That said, there's not much in the way of conflict or obstablacles in this story to be overcome.

SmittyNZSmittyNZover 10 years ago
Great series, although a somewhat abrupt ending

I look forward to seeing what you create next!

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