All Comments on 'The Secret of Village Court - Day 01'

by Inkysquid718

Sort by:
  • 20 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sweet, loving, believable story. Thank you!

I very much enjoyed your well written story. Loving warmth, respect and care for each other. As usual, the girl realizes there is something between them well before the guy does. He does catch on a bit, but it is bigger than either of them yet realize.

Looking forward to the next chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More!

A 2nd chapter is much needed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
yes!

Yes, more chapters are definitely needed--several more.

Hope your muse is busily feeding your thoughts with more loving ideas.

Love the way you have started this warm-hearted story.

sabra16023sabra16023over 6 years ago
Very Warm Loving Story

Well written.More chapters please. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What a lovely tale

Loved this one from the first line onwards and by the time the end rolled around it delivered even more than expected. It always nice to see genuine young affection turn into love and actually blossom when given a chance. Them being cousins gives a lot of leeway to their relationship and being stuck at the cabin might just take care of the rest. And I'm pretty sure that her father wouldn't mind him for his princess, he might actually be the only male he sees worthy of hid daughter.

So far it's a 5* and hopefully there are many more chapters on its way pronto!

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
loved it thank you

I hope you will write some more of this loving story

Inkysquid718Inkysquid718over 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I know most of my stories arent as sensational as some of the others, but i am trying to bring as much realism and romance. Thanks for reading and the support!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Enjoyed it

I really enjoyed this story. It put a cutely smile on my face!!

Bwaaaaaaaaaaaahahaaaaaaaaaa!

Decent story, but find another word besides using cutely 50 times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
FANTASTIC...AMAZING...LOVED IT

Was Kacey a virgin?

No mention in the story.

Hope they find a way to be together.

Beautiful and tender love story.

Looking forward to future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Look forward to more!

Great set up! Look forward to many more chapters already!!!!

Turtle1952Turtle1952over 6 years ago
Excellent

waiting for some more of these two, they seem to be in love already.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
enjoyed

I really enjoyed this story and look forward to many more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A LOVING, EROTIC BEGINNING

Don't keep us in suspense any longer. Please keep their passion growing. Otherwise they may freeze when the wood gives out. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
day 2

Any word on when day 2 will be out

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Day 2

Day 2 please......

Irishbear03Irishbear03about 5 years ago
Looking Forward to Day 2

Great Story so far can’t wait for day 2!

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 5 years ago
ready

and waiting for day 2

SmallWunderSmallWunderover 4 years ago
My panties are so wet

This was hot. I likes the build-up. You could easily be published with writiethis good.

OldManSOldManSover 3 years ago
Are you still alive?

You have a few unfinished stories laying around.

Nothing posted since 2017.

Help!

Keith

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous