All Comments on 'The Secretary'

It doesn't 'flow'. Awkward sentence construction and misspelling mean't stop start and going back lines to try and pick it up again that was just frustrating. Have an Editor look at it and smooth out the bumps.

Jessica is your old secretary and Jessica is your new secretary. Dude, it’s real easy to make up a female name.

The shift in the power Dynamic was just a little too forced, if you have dragged it out longer I think the change wouldn't have been so jarring and seemingly uncharacteristic for the protagonist.

Biggest load of crap I have read in a long time.

How did he not know the applicant was a manager at his local sub shop where he ordered his "Favorite"?