All Comments on 'The Secretary Who had to Pee Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Another piss poor chapter. I would say author has shit for brains but it may be piss for brains.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Oddly hot

Not into pee but this was hot

tentaclesforalltentaclesforallover 6 years ago
The pressure mounts...

You are great a building tension and if this isn't everybody's cup of tea (or several), I for one like your story, the characters and where this is going.

A little bit of well-written kink never hurt anybody and while a few negative comments are to be expected in a somewhat less than mainstream category here; please don't hold it in and let your imagination (and everything else for that matter) run freely.

I for one will be waiting for the next chapters with great anticipation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Make Do

Didn't bother reading past "make due" in the heading!

Adrian69702006Adrian69702006over 6 years ago
Another excellent story

This is another excellent story and I look forward to more of the same. Well done!

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