by heartbreakkid96
very well done. Invites continuation. Five stars. Will definitely be reading earlier works. Please continue.
I'd like to read more bout jack and his new skills
I know, I know, you did a very good job, but it left me wanting more. So I gave you 4 stars, hoping you'd want more, and write a continuation, to achieve 5 stars. LOL Very well written, and I am glad, he was adequate.
what a wonderful read. I hope you can write some more of this and perhaps other stories. I like your style