All Comments on 'The Seduction'

This sure is one hot and steamy story. Very good writing style. Give us more ok !!

A good start to your story. Get more detailed and give us more.

Congratulations on your first published erotic story here at literotica.

A good start, I look forward to further chapters on your sexual awakening. Perhaps slow down the rush and provide more detail around the sexual experience.

KL is a great place to open up your sexual experience.

I look forward to reading more.

B

Kind of stupid and unfinished.

another 50 pages would start it!!