All Comments on 'The Seduction of the Kore Ch. 01'

But that aside, I really like this so far. I'll be waiting to next installment for sure.

waiting for the next Chapter.

Can't wait to read more!

pretty

cool so far

I absolutely love the plot!! Keep going :)

Good start. Is this meant to be your take on the myth of Hades and Perstephone?

i was expecting an update on "the tacking of lena" but good none the less. Hope to see a new installment of T.O.L. soon the suspense is near killing me; but i guess, all that is good comes in small doses.

love howyou've taken the myth of Hades and Perstephone and have made it your own. I can't wait to read more!! ......hint hint ;)

OH MY GOD!! This is absolutely delicious! Can NOT wait for more. Please write more soon :)

Please hurry with the next chapter. Loved it so far!

The frequent passing out is pretty amusing. :)

this is too good to abandon please update pretty please

This is a fantastic story, I check back all the time to see if you've updated.

This one is just getting started, would love to read some more of it.

Please continue this story! Its only just getting started.

Please finish this story! I love both of your stories.

haha this is amazing, you manage to spin a romantic tale that ends with a suspense finale!

please finish the story

Please finish this. It has the potential to be incredible. I've read your other works and you are amazingly talented. Please don't leave us in suspense!

For the love of God please continue this story! It is so good! I can't wait to read the rest.

Totally love your work! Pls pls continue! :))

Please write more :) loved it

I like how the story progresses.. I just don't like how Calissa always passes out.

I really hope you will continue this seris

love it. please write more!

great first chapter! i'm a little in love with Daemon already! please write more!!

... making your readers beg, don't you? This is good stuff. As others said, it would be a shame to abandon it. I'd gladly pay for the Kindle version. ;)

but get on making the new chapter with much haste pretty please. =)

This story is great and has so much potential! Please write more soon!

Love it! Please finish it!!

Your stories are incredibly hot, but I am impatient and looking forward to the next chapters very very much! Thank you for giving us these gems to keep us entertained. Looking forward to chapter 2 of this and chapter 6 of Lena's story!

Love this so glad ur continuing with it. I was expecting a regular. Demon not the big man himself. Wtg

I really love this story and the taking lena one, please write more soon!

I love both of your story dearly. And I enjoy reading them. Please update soon.

I love this story. Please continue.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Your stories are perfect.. I love them both.. Cant wait for more!

Please write more. Just no more fainting. :-)

Loved it. But can the girl be a little more 'ready to face anything' please?

I read your other story but I like this one more. I hope you'll finish this one! Pretty please?

Interesting take on Persephone. I'm glad that you haven't gone with the modern interpretation on Hades. I'm hoping to see Calista come into her own. The Greeks didn't play her as a victim for more then the initial kidnapping. I'm hoping that you won't either. If you honor the more Greek influenced tale, Hades has an interesting surprise in store.

Looking at this in comparison to your other more recent writing, I can see how far you've come. This is good, but you have definitely honed your craft more finely since you wrote this. Please continue to write, you have talent.

It looks like you intended to write more. I would encourage you to do so.

Oh please write more.. this is captivating.

Oh I hope you come back to life and write more of this story. I fell in love with Daemon instantly. Your writing always makes me want to paint you beautiful fanart; it just evokes such imagery in my mind. Those pictures will be my ransom for you writing more of this.

I do hope you develop Calista a bit more; you have a tendency to write slightly vapid, spineless girls. I would love a fierce kick-butt girl. You would write it well, I know it.

Please continue writing this one. I am a fan of your story The Taking of Lena and I hope after you finish that one, you would continue writing this. This is an interesting version on the Hades and Persephone love affair. I want to read more of the story. You are an amazing writer!

Please develop this story! Thanks

I will very much like it if you were to continue developing this story!!! Unlike anything else I have read on this site.

On the fence yet on this to be honest, but will continue to read before making up my mind on it.

I am a fan of your writing, looking forward to the rest of this story!

Please continue to develop this story! I love The Taking of Lena and your spin on the myth here. Can't wait for more!!

Such a great intro, please finish their story.

Please finish this story! It's magnificent!

I am so taken... :-)

You are good i'd give you that.

But the waiting is torturous.

please please finish!

More more more please!!

Please finish this story. I want to see the real seduction! Haha. Really, this story is amazing. I love it and I wish there were more chapters!!!

Pls continue the story! :) ♡

I broke my tablet screen while reading this but other than that this story is amazing so far and my name is Calista so feels.

Any plans on another chapter or an ending? Just curious :)

This is an awesome story so far will there be any more chapters soon?

I have read 'Taking of Lena', I am waiting breathlessly for the next chapter in 'Keeping', the new student/teacher story is wonderful, and now this?? MORE PLEASE!

Hey I was wondering if youve already finished this story from before? Or if this is super similar to another story?

My eyes were glued to the page! Where can I find the rest of this story?!

Miss, please finish this story. This is super amazing. I love you. You're a diamond in the mud. 😍

I really hope you find the inspiration to finish this story!

Pretty please!

When are u continuing this pls?

Finish this story please I love this

Please continue this story, I beg you :,(

Great interpretation of a Greek myth. Can't wait to see what your re-imagined version looks like. Keep writing! The story is good.

I truly loved this. I wish you had written the next chapter on it! Would have liked to have seen how it played out! 😊