All Comments on 'The Senior Prom'

I’m sorry but this was just so wrong. Wrong category and misleading. Couldn’t even rate it.

Should have been in group sex. Wrong word usage and misspelled words, this was just a bad story. Sorry but it was. IMO.

In addition to being in the wrong category, the piece was so poorly written as to be almost unreadable. Please have an editor look at your work before submitting. If English is not your first language (and it doesn't appear to be), please consider writing in your native tongue and have someone more fluent in English translate.

Ok this was not great I thought the brother was at sea and then all of a sudden he was there in the room and you can’t just introduce him and then call him pierre unless you introduce him as pierre you need to go back and revise this story or get someone to do it for you.

While there is a little lesbian sex involved it does NOT belong in this category. It was down right disgusting reading this as I was looking forward some girl on girl loving and instead I am accosted by monster cocks and hairy testicles. Honestly made me want to hurl.

...wrong spellings, wrong grammar, just about wrong everything (including, as someone has already noted, Renee's brother who is away at sea suddenly appears, unintroduced, in the middle of the action). Your name (or pen-name?) suggests that English may not be your first language in which case all the errors are not entirely your fault. If English is your first language then I'm afraid you have a lot to learn. If you intend to write again, I suggest you find a good editor to check and correct your work.