All Comments on 'The Serenity of Servitude Ch. 02'

by I_am_His_Beloved

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Insight into her mind

I love the gentle probing, the uncertainty, the discovery. I love the focus on her mental discovery and general protocal on how to view respect how our actions show respect for someone the way that words only echo. So many story writers focus on gimmicks, intense scenes that so few girls could actually accept in their mind.. at least at the self discovery stage. The Focus, of behavior and action, rather than intense bondage and heavy sex. I LOVE IT.

jenni_tujenni_tualmost 16 years ago
A clearer picture

I like this story line because it is informative about why dominance and submission are appealing. It has helped me understand some of my own feelings and not be so ashamed of what I have wanted for a long time. I hope you will continue it. The arousal factor very high but it is more mental than crude as the other comment indicated. Please write more.

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