All Comments on 'The Servicemen's Club Ch. 03'

First two submissions were interesting. Ending took off from reality and sucked big time.

I'm a bit at a loss of what to say - I'm glad you have turned more humanistic and not wussie in this story - I hope readers will read past your name and read the story to see the change in direction. I believe it will be accepted as more believeable realitywise and less disrespectful to husbands and most male readers. All in all I applaud your effort - it was more erotic, readable and true to life. More Please!!!

Thanks and Regards

What a depressing story. It seemed obvious in chapter 2 that Alice was cheating but stupid ,for some reason, had to get documented proof. The most depressing part of the story was that Alice did not really seem very sorry about being the servicemens slut and even admitted that she enjoyed being a whore who got wealthy from putting out. She threw in an occasional "I'm so sorry, I didn't want to hurt" but it seemed more words than sincerity. She almost seemed to be relieved that John divorced her so she could get back to her studs and resume her fucking. sad story. --- the Ct. Yankee

He should have reported it to the service and the cop's then both the whore and the men would have been totally screwed as the women would have been done for prositution and the men for adultery which in the service is grounds for prosicution and a dishonourable discharge. This would have ment that not only would she have lost all the money that she had, gained a criminal record but also dave would have been kicked out of the service.

Husband will be okay but Davie the asshole needs to be punished for his involvement. I recommend castoration!

She is sorry that she got caught and that she is getting older,we are all getting older. But she did say that she was sorry.

Alice doesn't seem to realize that the looks and body that the young guys all lust over will start disappearing in a few short years. Then where will she be? Davie won't want her. He'll be done moved on to another hot mama. She'll be all alone. The only guy who loved her is long gone from her life. Sad really but that's life.....

NeedYou, not a bad story. Needs a little tweaking and editing but, all in all, not bad.

If a story needed some sort of revenge in it, this one does. John should have done something against Davie.

This is one of this Authors best pieces of work. This is a good story and the ending is great in real life we men would love to do the revenge thing maybe women too. But most often when we find out our spouse is cheating we get so evidence and just simply end it in divorce. Most of the problem come after the divorce. And John not knowing Alice was cheating for a while, I had no clue for a while, but as soon as I knew for sure like John ... it saw over. Again great story made me think about the past.

300 of them in 2 and one-half years. That's at least two different men a week. What a whore.

I agree with some of the other people. He should have notified the Military Police and the regular police that there was a prostitute ring running. He should have had an extremely public divorce. And he definitely should have beat the crap out of Davie.

I thought this story was great. It featured a strong husband figure that would not accept a cheating whore for a wife.

Of course, when the wife gets older, she will have to be paying those young men to have sex with her. Will she then think about the wonderful man and marriage that she trashed by her "love" of big cock?

i would have gotten at least some revenge. humiliated her like she did him. at least reported her to the shore patrol so she would have to work to find her john's. probably i would have gotten her arrested so she had a recourd and was as humiliated as he was.

This is the authors best work to date. I would like to read one more chapter that deal with the aftermath. How she deals with it when the rest of her family and friends finds out she is a cheating whore. How she deals with not having the love or future she shared with her husband of more then 20 years. Maybe some revenge Let the husband find a hot lover who is really into him

and have the wife realises what she lost. Have davie move away or not want her anymore, have the husband run into davie while he is with his ex and have davie start a fight with him and have the husband beat the shit out of him in front of everyone. Have her get some STD!!!

I says one more chapter!!!

This was fine writing. I enjoyed it and it almost feels nitpicking to point out a MATH error. She has been a Pro for two and a half years. Davie was her first. She did him 18 months ago.

I just found this well written gem of a story. A great erotic cheating wives story which is rare. It's usually one or the other. I do agree with Ed1 and would have liked to have seen a follow-up on all the points he listed but also and probably the biggest point would be that she is 48 years old and even though she looks fantastic for her age she doesn't have many years left where she will still attract 20 year old sailors. Who likes to fuck women that are their grand-mother's age. She can only defy age for so long and then what is she going to do for companionship. She just lost all her security as far as love and affection goes. She'll still have her money. Let's see, she made between $120,000 to $240,000 in the last two years so at least she have a roof over her head but probably alone with only her memories. Actually kind of a sad story about a woman hooked on drugs that ruined her life. Excellent writing, I wish I would have found this sooner. Thank you

The idiot "big cock" trope and the old stretched cunt cliche. The big cock trope is an indication that the author is either a faggot or has a teeny weenie. Another author who knows nothing about women or their anatomy.

Full of cliches and tropes. If this is real he would’ve beaten her to a pulp after she told her truth to him. I doubt she would’ve left the house alive. What a cunt she was.