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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
women in control

Good story a little naive tale but still sexy. More depth needed towards the sex is not brought out very well. Enjoyed what little there was of the story

StryWrter7StryWrter7over 8 years ago
gramatical errors

The idea / story is pretty good .. but did you ever consider having someone CHECK it before posting ? Lots of errors take away from the reading !

mattenwmattenwabout 1 year ago

Just idiotic. Which man would still be used today for such nonsense. His wife will first have to explain how she got the video. A video made without permission cannot be recognized in court. Second, why shouldn't he get a divorce. Or are you telling me that business owners who marry women with 20-year-old daughters don't have rock-hard prenups? Then you are really naive! But that's the whole story naive.

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