by sun_sea_sky
Very well written. Even as a man, I could feel the passionate feelings going on between them. Keep up the good work. Absolutely wonderful.
two people loving each other is always a wonderful thing and if both climax from the intensity of their feelings, all the better. Now that they have recognized their love for each other where , what will be next? What will they do to capitalize on their feelings to sustain a relationship forever?
"I've never come from anyone else before," Karen murmured. "Jim was great in bed, but I always had to finish myself off afterwards. Somehow he didn't hit the right spot, exactly. But you did." She smiled shyly at Paula. "How did you do that?"
"Well, we girls know what another girl likes,"
This is tiring - The constant male bashing to make lesbians feel better.
This came out of nowhere. Her husband was good but we can't have that - men in a positive light no way - so lets jab at the end. She could have said it was a great experience despite having good sex before - yet that dig is there. It's unnecessary unless the goal of this story is to prove that indeed lesbians are manhaters.